[Dung Pile] Crap

[Aero]

Originally posted by Pui Pui

Lens flare not needed.

The text seems like some sideshow, cast to the side. I probably would have integrated it with the two lines above it.

The entire thing looks like a ball of confusion.

On the plus side, all of the little things you did are very pleasurable.

[Captain Silver]

I don't want old stuff CnC'd.

[Aero]

I didn't see it at first. And it's only like 2 days old or so.

[Captain Silver]

Still old.

[Grandpa Gohan]

Originally posted by Pui Pui

Originally posted by Grandpa Gohan
No problem.

Yeah, it's what I do with lesser sig makers. =x

Implying something?

[Shun]

Originally posted by Grandpa Gohan

Originally posted by Pui Pui

Originally posted by Grandpa Gohan
No problem.

Yeah, it's what I do with lesser sig makers. =x

Implying something?

Both of you please stop it. We all do our best in making sigs this isn't a competition. Leave it alone please GG. Pui Pui c'mon man. That wasn't needed. It's constructive critisism, he's not trying to be an asshole, he's trying to help you.

[Captain Silver]

I wasn't implying anything, I was just saying what came to mind.

=) So really, I don't need to stop anything, because I'm not doing anything. O.o

So yeah, can you two stop posting in my thread untill I have something to CnC, or whatever.

[Captain Silver]

Edit: Ew, lame text.

[Shun]

Originally posted by Pui Pui


Edit: Ew, lame text.

I never realized you spell it ballofire not balloffire. That' sticks out to me now and it's cool. I see nothing wrong with the text itself but maybe the placement could be changed? The sig itself is great man. As always. Keep it up, big bro.

[Captain Silver]

The placement is fine. It just sucks.

[Aero]

Originally posted by Pui Pui
The placement is fine. It just sucks.

Yeah. Try without a stroke and use Arial Narrow, at a smaller pt. Then move it up a tad. Just a tad.

[Captain Silver]

Will do.

[Captain Silver]

Looks simple, but you're a fool if you think it was that easy to make. This was one of the hardest ones I've ever made.

[Shun]

It sucks! WTF? What the hell is that? That's some crazy shit bro. Great job. It's cool how his visor and name are color but the rest is black and white I like that. :]

[Captain Silver]

As you can see, I'm trying new styles. n_n

[Shun]

The text is kinda hard to read but I can't see it anywhere else so it's as perfect as it can be. It all blands together very well. My only problem is the white (soft brush?) at the top right is a bit too bright IMO. Overall though very good. Amazing for the first time with that style.

[Banned Chi Chi]

I agree, text is difficult to read, the stock image is HOTT, the BG is HOTT.

Overall: 8/10
BG: 9/10
Text: 7/10

[Captain Silver]

Thanks, you should check my later images. But yeah, the BG and stuff isn't the main thing. It's part concept and part style.. but yeah.



Made a few weeks ago, never put it up because it sucked. I just thought I'd put it up now.

Edit: He's in a sewer by the way.

[Shun]

How does that suck? Thats fuckin' hot IMO. My only problem with that is the text because it sticks out to me (its a little big and the maybe lower the opacity a tad?) and distracts me a little bit from the actual sig. Ohter than than like I said. Fuckin' hot.

[Olibu]

I think you should have erased the filter effects around the render, other than that, not bad.