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Adding Moves Thread
#21
I'll give a description dont worry Big Grin.

And I added 98 TP's today, so I could only have one move (Destructo Disk) By next Sunday I'll have another one Big Grin
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#22
500 Int, 10th Move


Chains- Minoshia throws out his arms and long black coils form from his palms, three coils per hand. The long 'chains' are whipped around like weapons, lashing his opponents. The black coils attack at a long melee distance, but strike with the force of energy attacks. If a direct hit is successful, and the target is close enough, the coils can temporarily wrap around a section of the opponent and hold it (ie- an arm, so it can't block, etc.), making areas of the body vulnerable to attack from the other coils.
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#23
Approved.
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#24
Int: 350. Custom move time...

Seismic Punch: The attacker?s arms become engulfed by a glowing ki aura. This causes their attacks to be faster and more powerful, depending on how much energy the user charges into the attack. However, this effect only lasts for a few moments due to its drain on the users ki.

This was the best description I could come up with, but I think I got the point across. If not just let me know and I'll change it....I'm not very creative in that department lol. Or maybe someone else could help me out with a description...So how about it...can I have it? Big Grin
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#25
Fine, so long as you understand it doesn't affect your Speed and Strength stats in any way.
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#26
250 INT!!!!!

Burst Shield- Manifesting his green ki into a physical form, Cargo conjures up a hand held shield, with a handle that he grips onto. It's made completely of ki, and therefore never takes on a metallic look/sheen, though the Namekian wielder has the ability to mold and shape the shield it even after it's been created. The shield's defensive strength is equivalent to the amount of ki Cargo expells into it, but the wider spread it is, the weaker overall it becomes.

and with this + Hokaku Kon Dan I want to make the combo

Burst Ball - After forming his Burst Shield, Cargo can mold the shield around his hand and forearm. It retains the defensive qualities of the attack but by combining it with the Hokaku Kon Dan technique, the shield can be turned into an offensive weapon. To do this, the Namekian summons the explosive ki he uses for his paralyzing ball into the shield and when it makes contact with the enemy, the ki is forced onto him and explodes.

EDIT: Help from Celipa!
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#27
Yup, and added. =D
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#28
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock
Fine, so long as you understand it doesn't affect your Speed and Strength stats in any way.

Yeah I know Big Grin
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#29
Polar Eclipse- Forming a solar blast into one had and a dark shadow orb in the other, Retane attempts to press the opposites together in front of him. As he does and the force increases, a beam fires at his target, continuing for as long as Retane can hold the polar opposites trogether.


Negative Eclipse- Similiar to Polar Eclipse, the reaction charges a barrier wich repels ki and objects with ki, slowing them down as they come.. The slower closer they get, the more force they have agasint them. The force applies to Retane's stats usually.
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#30
Rad gave 'em the okay. Added to your vault.
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#31
Headtail Blaster: This is Buu?s finishing move and can only be used once every day, as that is how long it takes the spherical end of his headtail to regenerate. Using this technique, Buu is able to extend his headtail towards his opponent, in which he wraps the tail around their body in an indefinite ?trap?. Afterwards, he sticks the sphere at the end of the headtail into the target?s mouth, and then detonates in while it is inside. This results in an immediate explosion, which, depending on the ki level, defense level, and luck level of the target, could immediately kill them.

200 Intelligence.
#32
Remove any reference to "it may kill them." Any move can be a finishing move. Change it to "depends on how much damage it does" or something similar. And nothing is ever indefinite, so there is a possibility people may escape from the "trap."
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#33
Headtail Blaster: This is Buu?s finishing move and can only be used once every day, as that is how long it takes the spherical end of his headtail to regenerate. Using this technique, Buu is able to extend his headtail towards his opponent, in which he wraps the tail around their body in an indefinite ?trap?. Afterwards, he sticks the sphere at the end of the headtail into the target?s mouth, and then detonates in while it is inside. This results in an immediate explosion, which, depending on the ki level, defense level, and luck level of the target, could hurt them seriously, depending on the damage it does.

200 Intelligence. Edited.
#34
Fine.
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#35
Windstorm- Retane places one arm across his chest and the other in front of him. He rolls them over each other in a 360 roll and creates what seems like wind whilring around his forearms. This attack can be either shot, at the foe, which the winds are razor sharp(Like Pikkons Hyper tornado), or used to propel other attacks from the arms into faster speeds.

450 INT
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#36
Approved.
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#37
Your attacks aren't allowed to change your stats at all. Do you want to revise them?
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#38
What he means is that you can't say "Corniss's attack speed and strength increase when he does this attack".
#39
Stealth- After much training Retane can create KI attacks that appear out of thin air anywhere he chooses around the area he is in. This is a great move to send a move such as Demise and other such moves at his opponent without them suspecting a thing.

Combo: Pressurize- Combining Windstorm with Stealth he could make a field of orbs which on contact send you flying in the opposite direction. Ki attacks as well if they hit the orbs.
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#40
Quote:Originally posted by Corniss
Well yeah indeed. I'm sorry wasn't fully awake when I wrote it.

What I meant is: you have the normal final flash strength, well if fired through the the sword, it's maximum power and speed go 1,5x up. It not like my stats go up, just the maximum of the attack.

If I would describe it that way, would it be alright?
No, I don't think so, because in this game attacks don't do "damage". You just roleplay like they hurt or miss etc.


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