Adding Moves Thread

[Ander]

I fully back up Seventeen's approvals. Super Mod approved.

[Inactive Cell Jr.]

Since I was told by Bardock to come here and get a new move improved instead of Tri Elements of Destruction. I would like to try to use one of those elements then.

Rai Shock- This is a basic ki blast fused with negative energy. It is quick and painful, if used correctly can be fatal. Only problem if not trained well with this technique then you make have shock recoil, in other words, shock yourself. With this attack size does matter. Putting enough negative energy into this attack can make it range from an acute shock to a massive effects of a thunder storm.

(if a longer description needed then I'll add more or if new attack it needed then I'll change Rai Shock.)

[OldJanemba]

Ok, android 18 told me to come here to see if my moves were ok. I'm going to change them a bit from their joining forum begginings.

Bunkai teleport
Allows janemba to dissasemble parts or his whole slef and exist in another dimension for a time, allows for really ranged attacks, as well as retreat quickly, or reflect many types of kai attacks, this uses up about 1/8 of Janemba's ki.

Ki Slash
Using his sword, Janemba can focus kai into his blade and cut enemies from a distance.
minimum: 1,000 ki
Maximum: equals current ki level

Scattershot
Fires many rapid kai blasts, usually a fairly weak attack, used primarily as distraction, but can be used as attack.

Dimension Sword
Using Bunkai teleport Janemba can do a serious of very fast and deadly blows with his blade, uses 1/4 of ki

[Ander]

Your moves don't need or have a specific measurement of ki. They're just used in roleplays.

You only get three moves to start with. Ki Slash and Scattershot are cool, but I'm going to say no on Bunkai Teleport and Dimension Sword, because they have elements of teleportation. Think of a different one.

[OldJanemba]

Ki Slash
Using his sword, Janemba can focus ki into his blade and cut enemies from a distance.


Scattershot
Fires many rapid kai blasts, usually a fairly weak attack, used primarily as distraction, but can be used as attack, if enough energy is used

Dimension Sword
Janemba can do a serious of very fast and deadly blows with his blade

((Down to three, and dimension sword is no longer teleport ))

[OldJanemba]

also, ive seen special abilites posted around the site, and was wondering if I could have one, it would be

Regenerate: Gathering the newly formed sins of the universe, Janemba can reform his limbs.

[Ander]

Only Cell, namekians, and the Buus can use regenerate.

[Orion]

Got some new move slots, need approving.

Galactic Donut Rings - Extending his index finger, Koola draws an imaginery circle in the air. Following the finger's movement, three yellow rings of ki are formed, one above the other. The Icer picks his target and then throws the rings towards it. If they hit, the rings constrict around the target, binding (usually) in the same place; upper arms, torso, and legs. These rings are very hard to break, and leave the target unable to move. Koola can then either beat them up while helpless, or choose to explode the rings from a distance, doing light to moderate damage.

Renzoku Shine Shine Missile - Used to pummel a target with a continuous stream of stronger-than-average energy bolts. Koola launches ki blasts at a fast rate, showering the target. Typically used in aggravated and/or desperate situations.

Eye Beams - Koola simply fires energy beams from his eyes. Not titanically powerful, but still packs a punch, especially to a foe who is unaware of them. Although similar to performance speed and appearance to Death Beam, they cannot pierce; they explode on impact.

Energy Wave Pulse (EWP) - Simplistic and effective. Koola tenses his muscles and launches an invisible shockwave from his body that travels in all directions. If anyone is struck by it, any means of ki detection is frazzled (ie. scouter, ki sense), allowing Koola to slip off the radar. The pulse feels like a strong buffet of water, so it creates a split-second disorienting effect also.

Icer Fury - A rarely utilised attack, but by far Koola's strongest. When Koola's rage gets too much to contain, he starts screaming. His aura flows untamed, eventually transforming into a blue dome filled with electricity. More charge time creates an overlapping dome. The longer he charges, the more domes there are. Once there is too much energy contained within the domes, it detonates, creating a massive eruption of power.

There are two downsides. Number one, Koola must be in his x20 transformation or higher. Number two, once performed, the changeling has no more energy, and he collapses unconscious.

[Mal Nova]

Originally posted by Retane
Windstorm- Retane places one arm across his chest and the other in front of him. He rolls them over each other in a 360 roll and creates what seems like wind whilring around his forearms. This attack can be either shot, at the foe, which the winds are razor sharp(Like Pikkons Hyper tornado), or used to propel other attacks from the arms into faster speeds.

450 INT

Needs to be added to my character vault. It was approved by Akane on page 2.

Originally posted by Retane
Stealth- After much training Retane can create KI attacks that appear out of thin air anywhere he chooses around the area he is in. This is a great move to send a move such as Demise and other such moves at his opponent without them suspecting a thing.

Combo: Pressurize- Combining Windstorm with Stealth he could make a field of orbs which on contact send you flying in the opposite direction. Ki attacks as well if they hit the orbs.

Never really got an asnwer so?


New move

Int 550+

Magicians Orb- Retane creates multiple shadow orbs(energy barriers that are see through on the inside but black on the outside), around a small area. Once incompassed in one, he can transport/telport himself from any of the orbs created.

[OldNoriAccount]

I'm iffy on the shadow orbs do to the fact that they could be abused to allow it so you can't be hurt at all in a fight.

[Mal Nova]

Let me think for a moment to then see what unmentioned words I forgot to add.

The barriers can only be created within a certain area. They are used as a strategical tactic to usually block you basic attacks and the like and put him in a better position to counter his enemy. Being two wayed reverse mirror he can see them but they cant see him. The more Orbs he creates the weaker their defences are. And I wont abuse it trust me. Theres something else I could add to if I need to limit it any more.

[OldNoriAccount]

I'll still get someone else to look at it. I just.. don't know. =P

[Mal Nova]

Look at it? It's sexy and funny. I had thoguht I had it approved some time ago but just can't remember. Or maybe not lol.

[OldNoriAccount]

Yaaaaaaaaay for new move.

Cho Rikikubaku Retsu

Drawing her Ki into herself Akane makes a living bomb within herself; making a final devestating attack that depletes all of her energy. It has four stages.

First Stage

Akane draws her energy into herself; forming a golden aura around her that ripples wildly with chaotic energy. While the aura starts off large it shrinks down in size slowly to form a small sphere around the human that ripples with chaotic energy.

Second Stage

After drawing in her energy the woman spreads her arms wide; as if to catch the energy around her. Placing her arms over her chest the golden warrior draws the last bit of energy into herself; making tha aura around her all but dissipate; the odd glow of her body the only sign of her attack.

Third Stage

Akane spreads her arms wide; a large ball of Ki surrounding her body as hundreds of Ki bolts fly off of her in every direction in rapid succesion for a few moments; filling the sky with her golden Ki. Her energy is rapidly dimineshed in this stage.

Fourth Stage

Akane loses all but a slim amount of her energy; preventing her from flying, or even defending herself.

[Orion]

Originally posted by Koola
Galactic Donut Rings - Extending his index finger, Koola draws an imaginery circle in the air. Following the finger's movement, three yellow rings of ki are formed, one above the other. The Icer picks his target and then throws the rings towards it. If they hit, the rings constrict around the target, binding (usually) in the same place; upper arms, torso, and legs. These rings are very hard to break, and leave the target unable to move. Koola can then either beat them up while helpless, or choose to explode the rings from a distance, doing light to moderate damage.

Renzoku Shine Shine Missile - Used to pummel a target with a continuous stream of stronger-than-average energy bolts. Koola launches ki blasts at a fast rate, showering the target. Typically used in aggravated and/or desperate situations.

Eye Beams - Koola simply fires energy beams from his eyes. Not titanically powerful, but still packs a punch, especially to a foe who is unaware of them. Although similar to performance speed and appearance to Death Beam, they cannot pierce; they explode on impact.

Energy Wave Pulse (EWP) - Simplistic and effective. Koola tenses his muscles and launches an invisible shockwave from his body that travels in all directions. If anyone is struck by it, any means of ki detection is frazzled (ie. scouter, ki sense), allowing Koola to slip off the radar. The pulse feels like a strong buffet of water, so it creates a split-second disorienting effect also.

Icer Fury - A rarely utilised attack, but by far Koola's strongest. When Koola's rage gets too much to contain, he starts screaming. His aura flows untamed, eventually transforming into a blue dome filled with electricity. More charge time creates an overlapping dome. The longer he charges, the more domes there are. Once there is too much energy contained within the domes, it detonates, creating a massive eruption of power.

There are two downsides. Number one, Koola must be in his x20 transformation or higher. Number two, once performed, the changeling has no more energy, and he collapses unconscious.

It's been three days. Staff?

[OldNoriAccount]

Approved Masta Koola.

[Ander]

Retane, your shadow move is a form of teleportation, and whether or not it's only for short distances, it's still teleportation. It gets a no. If you want to make it purely a shield type move with no teleportation, that would be fine.

[Mal Nova]

Well what if it involved that AStral move I had tyhought up, that was kinda and kinda not approved?

[Mal Nova]

My mind went into creative mode again.

Kinda needed soneone higher then Krillin to approve it all

Edit: If I Used Magicians Orbs like Yu-gi-ohs Magical Hats. Retane could be in one of them and they all move around in a circle or a patteren direction. Would that be fine?

[Mal Nova]

Remake:

Magicians Orb- Retane creates a dark orb around himself or another, that is black on the outside and see through on the inside to create a Ki Barrier. Once encompassed the Orb splits multiple times, one of the orbs containing Retane, the others either blank or hiding an ally. Once incompssed in a Shadow Orb, the person stays in it's orb until it breaks through it or the user releases the move. The more barriers created at the time, the weaker the barriers are.