I think I did pretty good.

[Blue]

So, any thoughts on this last one I did? I let slip a few of tidbits of his history in this thread, but a couple key ones in this post in particular.

In any case, how'd I do?

[Jewtastic]

Other then the fact that I don't remember a girl being there before it was amazing dude.

The beginning really set up the scene and you took it from there.

Good job.

[Blue]

Oh... Your flashback confused me. I thought the Sensei was a girl... Um... Let's just say Spop was hallucinating...

[Jewtastic]

That works.

I'll get one up tomorrow.