Someone Give Me A Hook

[Juno]

I'm in real need of a good beginning roleplay with Julius. I'm unsatisfied with "Revolution" so I'm thinking about just starting over. So if anyone has any ideas for something that could introduce my character well, just give it to me and I'll try it out. Please?

[Kazuya]

How about this: Go with pretty much the same angle as you were, EXCEPT, backpeddle a bit. Introduce Julius in the middle of some kind of action scene. Like, him escaping the fight that ended up with his sister being injured? That would be a great way to explain what happened to her (Which i'm interested, i wanna know >.>) and also give the impression that Julius is involved in some kind of violent activity, you see?

[Juno]

In a flashback? Because I'm rewriting the second post right now, and I almost have a perfect oppertunity to include one if that would work.

[Kazuya]

Yeah, just flashback to it and then lead it into where he's at right now. It could still work out in your roleplay. If you need help, hit me up on AIM or pm me what you got.

EDIT: And by the way, awesome job on the reworked post.