Special Request Drawing

[Jinpo]

My new custom is going to be a black half-saiyan. However, it's really hard to find a picture of such. Therefore, if you have time and feel like it, could someone design this character. I'd love you forever!!!!! If so, specs are:

Height: Around 6'1, 6'2
Build: Slender but Muscluar
Hair: Typical Saiyan
Clothes: Regular size t-shirt, Blue Jeans, Black Jacket, Cap (forwards), Sneakers.

I don't thin I have been around long enough do deserve this, but again, I'd really appreciate it.

[Jokker]

Is that good? It's only a sketch, tell me what you want changed, I'll change it, then ink it up, and you can get someone else to color it, since I still suck at that.

EDIT: And no, that isn't a final draft, it's only a quick 5 minute sketch. I'll add all the details afterwards.

EDITEDIT: Oh, and if anyone wants to offer C&C, I'd appreciate it.

[Android-18]

It's a bit anatomically(sp?) incorrect, however, it's pretty good regardless. I'd fix the eye a bit, something about it bothers me. The hair might need to be changed, something about it just doesn't scream "saiya-jin".

[Jokker]

Yeah, the eye's a bit high up. Looks like a snake this way.

And yeah, forgive me for forgetting what a saiya-jin actually looks like, but I haven't seen any DBZ in ages. <_<

The anatomically incorrect part is the fact that I'm very used to drawing One Piece or Naruto styled art, which isn't all that correct.

Second draft coming up in a bit.


EDIT:


Anything you want changed before I start inking it?

[Jinpo]

From the drawing class I took, i learned that the eye should be in the middle of the face.

I see that you shortened the neck, but maybe just a tiny bit more.

Um...look at my current avatar and sig for details as far as facial construction and expression. Also the jacket would be unzipped.

It looks really good! I really appreciate it!

[Jokker]

Well I tried various ways to place the eye, and this is the only one that looked remotely good. I'll try to fix it.

Will shorten the neck more.

I'm pretty bad with following a reference, but I'll try to use the images as reference.

Will make one more draft, with a no-clothes, and a clothes version.

No problem, by the way. It's good practice for me. :)

[Jinpo]

I'm pretty bad with following a reference, but I'll try to use the images as reference.

Oh, well. I just meant. He probably wouldn't smile like you have in the picture. Maybe a sly smirk or a neutral expression.

[Jokker]

Jacket drawn, will look better if coloured. Which I'll try to do, but I'm not guaranteeing anything.

Once again, I CAN'T make a different type of eye. Believe me, I've tried.

Fixed the grin into a very nice frown. That good?


EDIT:

Scratch that, I inked it already.



Or at least, tried to.

Commencing colouring.

EDIT2:



Commencing shading.

EDIT3:



Done.

I don't think I'm going to be able to modify anything, being too lazy and all that.

Hope it's fine.

Also, I hope you don't mind I'm adding it to my deviantArt account.

[Jinpo]

Thanks! Again, I really appreciate it.

Do you mind if I photoshop it a little bit?

[Jokker]

Sure, go ahead. I don't mind.

With that expression he looks like he's o.o. Or :|.

And I'm like D:, because I wanted him to be like D:<, or at least >:D.

Meh. I'm semi-satisfied with how it came out. Glad you like it.

[Alura]

You should draw me something.