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Toturak
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Name: Toturak "Sparrow" N'fernal

Race: Android

Sex: Male

Starting Planet: Earth

Profession: Assassain

Fighting Style: Calm and Tactical

Short Bio: Toturak was created in a lab on Earth. The lab was located
200 miles outside of West City. Toturak was built with one simple mission
and that was to obey all orders and complete any and all missions with a
100% success rating. He did just that for many years until finally he
was considered obsolete by his creators. The new model was scheduled
for testing within the week and Toturak was scheduled for destruction.

Toturak's programming was becoming corrupted slowly by a outside source.
During the night he activated his stealth functions and moved through
the labs silently eliminating anyone who had breath in their lungs. He
did not utter a word as his victims asked why. He simply did as his
programming dictated.

Toturak fled the base after the assassanation's and fled into the
mountains. It was there the one who corrupted his programming waited.

"I see you have found your way."

"..Why is my programming malfunctioning. I am only operating on sixty
percent efficiancy."

"I have used this device to corrupt you. During one of your missions
You slaughtered a base full of my most prized scientists. So I had a
spy of my own within your base of operations obtain your blueprints.
I had my remainig scientists develop this divice to corrupt you even at
a distance."

" What am I to do now."

" I have given you freedom in hopes that you will come work for me.
I have many jobs that a creation of your caliber could easily handle
for me"

"Show me the way."

General Description: He stands at 5'8 and weighs in at 220. His skin tone is blue and purple. He has a single orange eye placed above where his nose should be. He helmet is capable of being retracted and revealing a human face that appears to be around 19 years old. He has black hair and brown eyes and a scar crossing his lips to his throat. His body is very well toned. His body armour does not come off.

Starting Abilities: Stealth, Combat Teleportation

Trait: Defiant

Strength:20
Focus: 20
Endurance:25
Agility: 35

Role-play Sample: The clouds moved slowly over the sky. Toturak’s eyes looked up at the moon. He knew that the time was now to move in and eliminate his enemy. He moved silently through the field on his chest after activated his stealth programing. After several hundred feet he was able to spot a small truck moving towards a checkpoint station that lead directly to the center of the town. He took his chance and within a split second was climbinbg into the back of the large shipment truck.

He waited a few minutes and theen peered out and saw his opportunity and dove out of the back of the truck into a side alley. He looked up and saw a simple fire escape and jumped up catching it. He climbed slowly towards the top. He stopped and peered into a open window at a couple watching television. He continued his climb to the top. He stopped at the final window and peered in. There he was standing in plain sight. His target was a human in his mid fifties with salt and pepper hair and dark green eyes.
He noticed that he limped on his left leg and his hands shook. He was either nervous or plagued by a medical problem.

No guards were in sight so he leaped to the windows edge and siddled around to a smaller window. He pulled himself up and looked inside. It was a dark bedroom that was empty of any lifesigns. The window was open so he climbed in and moved across the floor swiftly yet silently. The door handle jiggled causing him to panic. He quicky looked for somewhere to hide so he dove under the bed and remained still. His target moved in slowly towards the bed where he removed his garments and settled in for a decent nights sleep. Toturak smiled beneath his armored mask. He placed his hands in two spots on the bottom of the bed.On each of his palms were a small weapon with one bullet in each one. A low hiss was heard as bullet fired. One into his left lungh and the other into his right.
He moved from his hiding spot and stood over his victim.

“Mr. Hanzo sends is reguards slug.”

The victim coughed up two clots of blood and passed from this world onto the next. Toturak moved to the window and began his journey back to base.
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#2
Looks fine. You filled everything out. You do have a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be fixed with a little practice or Microsoft Word. We're going to have to change your username, too. You can make it either Toturak or Sparrow, whichever your character will most be called. I'll go ahead and activate you and get your stuff set up.

Welcome to Chubbs.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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#3
Alright I made a account named Sparrow just waiting onit to get activated. And btw where would be a good place to start? And is the saga open ?
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#4
Since I already put the starting XP on this account, I'm going to rename it Sparrow and delete the other one. Just keep using the one you're posting with. I'm not sure if the saga is still open, but you're more than welcome to ask Juno. He's the man in charge of it. As for a place to start, you chose Earth as your starting planet, so you can make a personal storyline thread there if you like.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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#5
Alright man thanks much.
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#6
Your Roster and Training thread will also be found under "Sparrow." And no sweat.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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