06-08-2009, 05:51 PM
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=25877
Looking for some good, old-fashioned critique on what is looking to be my first extended solo storyline. Anything will do, and I'll be happy to read something of yours in return.
Looking for some good, old-fashioned critique on what is looking to be my first extended solo storyline. Anything will do, and I'll be happy to read something of yours in return.

