01-08-2010, 08:24 AM
I'd like to get a little feedback on how I'm progressing with Wolfgang. I've started his story in Awaken though I'm a bit more curious about any reader opinions on the character himself. This is a new type of personality that I'm none too familiar with so laying any type of ground work for development has been a little shaky in the sense that I want to try and keep an innocence about him.
Till now all my characters have had a very "tough guy" appeal, or at least tried to, in a type of laid back manner where they have this keen history of combat and can hold their own in a fight. With Wolfie I'm working with a child no older than ten or eleven, whose never even thrown a punch before, cries at the drop of a hat and is frightened of his own shadow. Somehow he sprouts a tail in the middle of the night and suddenly his entire life flips on him with challenges he struggles with because of his timid nature.
I've written out quite a bit of story up through a few crucial turning points in his quest that I hope will have people wanting to see more of the boy's trials. Soooo yeah, no need to read the entire thread, just maybe enough to get a good opinion and maybe a little garnish on the side.
Till now all my characters have had a very "tough guy" appeal, or at least tried to, in a type of laid back manner where they have this keen history of combat and can hold their own in a fight. With Wolfie I'm working with a child no older than ten or eleven, whose never even thrown a punch before, cries at the drop of a hat and is frightened of his own shadow. Somehow he sprouts a tail in the middle of the night and suddenly his entire life flips on him with challenges he struggles with because of his timid nature.
I've written out quite a bit of story up through a few crucial turning points in his quest that I hope will have people wanting to see more of the boy's trials. Soooo yeah, no need to read the entire thread, just maybe enough to get a good opinion and maybe a little garnish on the side.