Joining as spikes

[Spikes]

Name: Spikes or Spike for short

Age: 14

Race: saiyan

Sex: Male

Starting Planet: Planet Vegeta

Profession: None

Fighting Style: courageous

Short Bio: Spikes was born a lower-class saiyan, although his father, Tarnus, was born as a Elite-class, his father was also a martial arts master. Spikes grew up learning martial arts from his father, and at the age of 12 he was given a black headband with a white dragon on the front. during his schooling on planet Vegeta Spikes was always getting in fights because he was sticking up for the weaker saiyan kids, he would always go home as a beaten up kid, and his mother, Lina, was always patching him up.

General Description: Spikes is 5ft 9 and has black spiky hair and black eyes. on his right eye he has a scar going from the right corner of his eyebrow to the left side of his nose. he is constantly wearing his black and white saiyan armour and his tail is not wrapped around his waist. The only other thing he wears is his boots and The headband his father gave him.

Starting Abilities: Ki Specialization, Elemental Ki (Lightning)

Trait: Compassionate

Stats:
Strength - 35%
Focus - 20%
Endurance - 25%
Agility -20%

Role-play Sample: The night was young and cold for the young saiyan, the cold crystal-like rain droplets falling down from the heavens only to fall upon his face, a long day of training rewarded with a cool, natural shower.

it wasn't long after he had finished training that he was attacked by Lyco and Asher, two saiyan outcasts or bandits, whatever they liked calling themselves. he couldn't sense their power levels considering he didn't have a scouter or the ability to sense Ki, but he didn't have a choice, he couldn't out run them, as a matter of fact that's why he was out here, training to increase his speed, but the one thing he did have over them was his uncanny ability to manipulate his Ki and make it into lightning.

Spikes was considering some options of attack when out of the blue a ball of Ki just missed him.
"Hey kid, You gonna stand there all night or are we going to fight?"
" well that depends, are you going to make the first move or am I?"
at that moment the bandits, getting angry, Rushed at Spikes, one hitting him in the stomach and the other in the face.
"UUUGGGGHHHHH!!!!" Spikes collapsed on the ground.
"Hahahahahah, that was too easy!"
"yeah let's see what he has."
The bandits rummaged through the wet camp, only to find his black headband with the dragon on it.
"Looks like this headband is the only good thing he has."
at that moment spikes jumped up and shot a bolt of lightning out of his and at the bandit, the bolt hit him in the centre of his back. the bandit fell to the ground.

"Leave.. the headband....ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
at that instant spikes flew towards the second bandit unleashing a fury of punches and kicks, several blows to the bandits head and stomach. the bandit known as Asher flew backward into a giant rock. Spikes walked over to the headband, tied it around his forehead and left his camp.

[Orion]

Good stuff. If I could offer one tip, use a few more full stops rather than commas in your sentences. It makes it a little easier to read and it flows better.

Other than that, I'll set you up. Welcome to Chubbs!

[Vad]

You've been activated Spikes. Feel free to begin roleplaying. =D

[Spikes]

thanks, and Orion thanks for the tip ill be sure to use it in my posts