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Amie
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Name: Amie

Age:23

Race: Saiyan/Generic

Sex: Female

Starting Planet: Mercy

Profession: Unemployed

Fighting Style: aggressive

Short Bio: She was born the daughter of a low level sayian male and a unknown Human mother.She spent the beginning years of her life on Earth and was later transfered to planet Mercy to help with a few problems a friend of her fathers was having. There she has been residing and will continue to reside until the day comes that her powers are called upon by the forces of the galaxy....

General Description: Short blue hair with a blue bow in it, She stands at about 5"7 with a slender waist. She is always wearing blue. Because it tends to be her favorite color

Starting Abilities: Dark ki Combat Teleportation

Trait: Lone wolf

Stats: (all must be a combined total of 100%, with the exception of choosing Inner Strengh as an Ability, which gives you an extra 15%)
Strength - 25%
Focus - 14%
Endurance - 11%
Agility - 50%

Role-play Sample:
It had been 5 years since Amie had turned 18 and her father had issued her to go to planet Mercy.She at first being here on a unfamiliar world was having trouble adjusting to the new life.But soon things fell in. She helped her father's friend on his farm since he had no children of his own. She began feeling like she could enjoy life here retired and having a family of her own. If only she could find a male specimen that drew her attention. Like the one she left behind on planet earth did so many years ago. By now he's probably married and long into falling in love and forgetting she ever existed.


Things seemed to be going ok for Amie she was doing well on planet Mercy. If only the dreams and sense of something dangerous kept bothering her. (DREAM REALM IN BLUE) "How many times have i told you you useless halfbreed. You will never have the power you dream of if you continue to believe in your human nature." With tears streaming down her checks Amie left the room. No matter what happens she will never give up on the human things she loved. It was the only thing that connected her still with this world. Many years ago she was raped leaving a club on planet earth. And it had isolated her form her friends,family,even the love of her life didn't respond to her the same. So in her eyes the only thing she had left was the power to become one of the greatest in the world. And seek out that dark haired man who committed the crimes against her.
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Greetings, Amie!

Your character information looks great. Your role play was good, but it had some spacing and grammatical errors. Nothing a quick revision and spell check wouldn't fix. :D

One thing about it that can't carry over to the In Character forums is that statement "Dream Realm in Blue." You're free to put that in your roster under an Information section however. ;D

I'll get you activated and set up with a Roster and Training page. Welcome to Chubbs! Feel free to post any questions you have here or PM any staff member with them. We also have a forum area dedicated for asking questions located here.

I hope you enjoy your stay!

~Vad
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