Feedback?

[Bra]

So, I was writing the next part for "A New Direction" and I was like, "Hey, do the other people think this is cool?" so I decided to ask.

Tell me whether it rocks, or sucks, or is something in between, and please give yer reasons why. Granted it's still in it's "build-up" phase, I'd like to know what you guys think, because I don't want to write something people get bored from.

So, yeah. You have the floor.

[Raditzu]

I was pleasantly surprised, Bra. My only porblem with it wasn't actually your fault. I haven't read much of your stuff, so I don't have a very good handle on Bra's character and most of her dialouge seemed arbitrary; I couldn't follow where her responses/comments came from. Again, its not like that's your fault, so don't take it too seriously. I'm sure you would say the same thing after jumping into the middle of a post about Rad.

[Bardock]

I like it. You explore and manipulate your character very well. Even for someone who just randomly offs a couple of Nameks... o_0

[Bra]

In response to Rad, yeah, I sort of... failed to mention that this is part three in a trilogy. In order to understand anything going on in the RP, you'll have to read "Realization of Grandeur" on Earth, then "Blue Lightning" on Vegeta. Also reading "Friend or Foe" on Outer Worlds would help.

Yeah. This is the end to a three-part saga that's been going on since I started here.

To the others, thanks, I appreciate the responses.
I'll try to keep things interesting.