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Just a little note to Bra, as friendly suggestion. Its kind of hard for me to read when your rp is all bundled together.
Maybe if you seperated your paragraphs it would be easier to read? Just a suggestion, of course ^_^
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Eh... Try doing the whole suggestion to individual member thing through PMs...
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Now, now, Broli... don't be too quick to lock things. I think honest advice is something that can be shared with everyone. I know many, many members who have had problems with this exact thing. I have also been thinking about how Bra does this. It would make things much, much easier to read if you organized them a bit better, Bra.
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I understand, Brolli, and will remember that. Thanks to Rad too, of course, for bringing my point accross.
Once again, its understood about PMing about individual suggestions.
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Yeah I used to do that a lot too, like when I did my personal saga on Vegeta as TU.

Man was that hard to read.
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Oh....
Eh heh. And I did that on purpose. To me it always looks like someone who separates paragraphs/spoken sentences is trying to artificially inflate the size of their RP....
But, if that's what you want me to do, then I'll make some changes to my writing style.
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Aperrently you never read books. They are spaced and organized, but i dont think thier trying to artificially inflate. Common sense and such... deductive reasoning... yea....
When in doubt: It was sarcasm.
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Technically, you're supposed to create a new paragraph if you change the subject.
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Erm.... I do create new paragraphs. I have no indentations because I can't use "tab" on Internet Explorer, and besides, that's not what I meant.
I don't think my writing is unorganized. Had I been able to indent my paragraphs, I would've done so. Garlic, I'm not even going to try and argue with you, just let it be known that the spacing and organization in a book is DAMN WELL different than the spacing and organizing which is commonplace in this RP. Nonetheless, I'll attempt to conform to this place.
Now leave me the hell alone.
EDIT: THANK YOU Goku Jr. That's exactly what I was talking about. I wasn't talking about what you'd see in a book.
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Well, it's not fair to just pick on Bra, other people have done/do it as well..
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Quote:Originally posted by Bra
Erm.... I do create new paragraphs. I have no indentations because I can't use "tab" on Internet Explorer
Which is why people use the double space to seperate paragraphs and speakers. Without the ability to indent, you need to use another method of organizing your writing.
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I agree, Rad. Which is why I said I'd change my writing style.
Trust me, if I didn't agree. I probably would have flamed Burter.
(No offense)
But that's just me. Are we done now?
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Yeah, we're done.
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Agreed. I despise seeing, "Ande thin wee killd hime."
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Is there something difficult about "don't spam this board?"
*shakes head*
You guys ruined yet another topic.
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