10-15-2005, 03:50 PM
Broli is taken, and that RP is not good enough, it was one long run-on sentence. Try using Microsoft word to fix your grammer, spelling, and punctuation. Also, add a lot of detail and depth.
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DA08 Winner. "Screw them, this was her show now."