10-31-2005, 12:24 AM
Nail's taken, sorry. =/ You'll need to pick anotehr character and post three starting moves. Also, you need to work on your RP sample. It is quite short and it lacks description; everything happened too fast. You could have described how Nail or Makki felt, or what the surroundings look like. Just take a look at some of the RPs on the boards and you'll get a good idea of what I'm talking about. Good luck.
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