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Your roleplay is good enough, as it demonstrates you have some grasp of what you are doing. However, you have a lot of spelling errors. You can fix that by typing your roleplays in Microsoft Word or
Spellchecker.net.
Register and someone will activate you.
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You've got a good grasp on writing, I think. You just need to post your three starting moves, but in the meantime go ahead and register.
Edit: Damn Bardock! XD
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Well, you did mention the three starting moves, Supes. =D
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Those check out A-okay.
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