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Joining as Dende
#1
Your roleplay is good enough, as it demonstrates you have some grasp of what you are doing. However, you have a lot of spelling errors. You can fix that by typing your roleplays in Microsoft Word or Spellchecker.net.

Register and someone will activate you.
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#2
You've got a good grasp on writing, I think. You just need to post your three starting moves, but in the meantime go ahead and register.

Edit: Damn Bardock! XD
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#3
Well, you did mention the three starting moves, Supes. =D
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#4
Those check out A-okay.
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