10-05-2006, 04:29 PM
Cui is retired and can not be selected. Anything with (NPC) or (Retired) by it's name can't be applied for. You can feel free to pick a different character though.
The only thing wrong I saw was that you wrote in present tense at a few points, try to use only past tense, we typically write that way here.
The only thing wrong I saw was that you wrote in present tense at a few points, try to use only past tense, we typically write that way here.
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DA08 Winner. "Screw them, this was her show now."