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Joining as Piccolo Daimoun
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Character: King Piccolo (Piccolo Daimoun)
Personality: Honor driven, Warrior like
Planet: Vegeta
Email: talonordo@gmail.com
Three Moves: Energy Barrier, Energy Sword, Special Beam Cannon


Sample RP:?Pl.. Please stop!? An old man with a balding head, big square glasses, and wearing a outdated white doctor suit begged.

It was always like this King thought to himself (ooc: IC I?m going to have him go mostly by the name King. Which has become a nickname for him.) at least with this weak pray. It was like they thought King had just killed his body guards for the fun of it.

?Please whatever they are paying you I?ll double it!? The old man said as he got on his knees and clamped his hands together.

As usual though King the bribe. It was like they didn?t understand that a Mercenaries into job security relied upon their word. King had signed the contract and to him his word was law. If all his years of tracking though had taught him one thing though it was that most of the universe lived under a different set of standards. Those weaklings needed laws, lawyers, and judges to keep their word. Bribes and blackmail was the way of all of the universe save one man.

?I?ll triple it then!!? His voice was getting more desperate as tears began to fall down his face, ?Please you have no idea what they want me to do! They want me to create beast out of prisoners! Change their very souls for their war machine! I won?t do it I can?t! Look in your heart don?t you see that I can?t!?

He wondered how long it would take before he heard the desperate moral speech. Always the victim that how most of his prey thought of themselves. None of them ever took responsibility for their actions they where always the victim. ?You started the program Doctor. You set up the funding, created the DNA splicing techniques, and personally used your own Mother as a test subject. So save the begging for your leaders.?

?Please Master Piccolo sir?. I?ll do anything you want! Stock?s in High Order Enterprises, control of the planet Junkson! Yours it will all be yours just let me go! Please!! I beg of you!!? The doctor said as he fell forward onto all fours and embraced King?s right leg. Wrapping his arms tightly around it, his tears splashing against King?s size thirteen boots.

Again with the bartering King thought to himself. What a cowardly lot these humans where no matter what part of the galaxy he visited with them in they where all the same.

The doctor then looked up with a bit of a sarcastic smirk on his face. ?I also have a young virgin daughter she is fifteen now and would be prime for relations. I heard that you where given male features as a payment something about wanting to forget your heritage.?

That was it for the Universes most famous Bounty Hunter. Although it was true he was all male he couldn?t stand anyone selling out their children. The ones that wanted to sell their children into a life of sexual servitude where the worse of all. The only male Namek in the universe then grabbed the doctor by the shirt and pulled him up from of the ground. With his free hand he slapped the doctor forcefully. The sounds of the smacks echoing through the room they where in. ?You cowardly son of a bitch! You are lucky they want you alive cause if they didn?t I?d make your death slow and painful.?

After that King punched the Doctor hard knocking him unconscious. He then flung him other his shoulder and walked back towards his ship. The Namek then pulled out a communication device it beep and hummed as he pushed a button on it.

?Yeah its me King. Yeah I have the son of a bitch. You better have my money Sayain is all I have to say.? Was all King said as he put the device back into his pocket.


OOC: If its allowed I'd like to make it part of King Piccolo's bio that he had gene minipulation done on him that made him sexual a male.
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#2
I just noticed that Piccolo Daimoun is still here. If thats the case I'll take Minoshia. But I was wondering if I could make him older? I'd like him to be about 20-30 something like that.
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#3
Are you friends with the person joining as Janemba? You're IPs are very similar and from the same provider.
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#4
No I'm not lol. His is close to mine? Maybe he lives near me. I'm from upstate New York.
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#5
Ok I looked further...

joining as pui pui

Your IP matches this one exactly, and yet the writing styles are obviously different...Care to explain =/?
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I have no idea nobody should have access to this computer, but me and my family. None of them would join a RPG. I never signed up to join as pui pui. I was once Grandpa Gohan here for a short time (I beleive I was the first guy to use him). I also was apart of your RPG when it was still going (if your the person I think you are) I joined as Toma. I use to have the siggy that said "For Clan Talon" on it. As I recall you where using the old Assassin's rogs layout.
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#7
Well, I'm just trying to be careful, so don't be offended. Mind if you just write a quick paragraph for me to make sure you're writing really is up to par? If so, just write something like...

A girl named Amy has to fight a big demon called JimBob.

Should be easy, if you can do that then you're good to go Smile.

Again sorry, but I'm just doing my job.
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No reason to applogize 18. If you are the girl who owned the sight (damn if I can remember the name. All I can remember is you used the Old DBZ Assassin's lay out) I'm thinking of I remember having lots of respect for your adminstrative rulings. Although I wasn't their for long.

Here you go:

After about a half hour of walking King finally arrived to his ship. It hadn?t been as pleasant as a stroll as King usually has after catching his prey. Instead of excitement, a feeling of accomplishment, and ecstasy the Namek was annoyed and ready for a drink. The good Doctor had woken up about fifthteen minutes ago and had been pleading ever since. First came the crying, then the begging, then the bribing all over again. This was his job though and the whining of cowards was as much a part of it as killing his prey.

I know short quick off the top of my head. Don't expect J.R.R. Tolkien lol.
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#9
I asked you to use my example lol...
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#10
lol sorry... Anyways:

It was his breath that Amy hated the most. It reminded her of a bad boyfriend who was always all over her during inappropriate times. Suddenly a huge blast of KI just scrapped across her face. Little Miss Perfect easily did a back flip landing about one hundred and twenty yards away from the beast. Instinctively Amy whipped her check with her right hand and felt her blood begin to run down here face. She had to stop day dreaming during fights. It was what her master always warned her about. Amy then slapped her face as her right leg gently turned until it was perfectly perpendicular to her left. This wasn?t the kind of fight she was use to. This wasn?t some pervert grabbing at her, a bully picking a fight, or a mugger who was in need of a beating. This was the legendary JimBob if she was going to beat him she had to concentrate.
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#11
You can make him older, but not too much.

I'll change your name, so yeah you're accepted.
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