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Pikkon
#1
*I looked on the characters available and Pikkon was available. I hope this is correct.

Anyway, this is my join application.

Character: Pikkon

Personality: Pikkon is a lone wolf, a maverick. He does what he wants to do and doesn?t let anybody get in the way. Fighting is his life, the determination he has in a fight is outstanding. He never gives up and will fight to the bitter end. Spending his days training has transformed Pikkon?s body into a deadly weapon; a force to be reckoned with.

Planet: Earth

E-mail: Tewierik_ash@hotmail.com

Starting Moves:

Telepathy
Telepathy is an ability that allows one person to mentaly communicate with another. While you do not need to have telepathy to receive telepathic messages, you do need it to send them. While a seemingly mundane technique, this can be used for things like coordinating attacks without your opponent knowing it. There are many other possible applications.

Body Split
You split your body in multiple selves. Although your powerlevel isn't as high as in your normal body, you have the advantage of outnumbering your opponent.

Spiritken
A spiritual green aura will surround them, enhancing their abilities for the duration of the fight.

Role-play sample


Pikkon carrying two large tree limbs made his way back to camp. Crashing through the last of the overgrown bushes, he entered his clearing. Dropping the logs down besides the smouldering fire, he collapsed down onto the ground beside them exhausted.

Taking a few slow deep breaths Pikkon glanced up towards his shelter. He stopped breathing.

?Working hard there I see old friend,? Sneered a familiar voice.

?Piccolo,? Pikkon said staring him in the eyes.

?You know why I?m here,? Piccolo said returning Pikkon?s stare.

Slowly rising to his feet Pikkon planted his feet firmly on the ground, raising his head and meeting Piccolo?s eyes he said ?Let?s do this then.?

Piccolo smiled and planted himself firmly into the ground preparing to attack.

?I?ve been waiting for this moment for a very long time,? Piccolo said as he raised himself up slowly into the air.

Acting quickly Pikkon began to focus; he looked down at the ground below him and closed his eyes. Piccolo watched intrigued, then suddenly Pikkon slit into two. Piccolo hovered slightly above the ground gazing at the two Pikkon?s.

?New trick,? Pikkon said, laughing. ?Here I come.?

The two warriors flew straight towards Piccolo, before reaching him they changed direction and flew up into the sky. Stopping mid flight they looked straight down at enemy and from six hundred meters up began dropping a volley of energy balls down onto Piccolo and the clearing.

Anticipating the attack Piccolo quickly focused his energy into a energy field around his body protecting himself from the energy blasts. He braced himself as an onslaught of energy dropped down onto him.

Stopping the attack Pikkon merged back into one and flew down to the clearing ready to fight.

Suddenly the two warriors froze. They gazed upwards towards the mountains. Someone was coming.


If there are any questions please ask.
Also I am a writing student and see this as a great way for practice and improve my writing, I will get better and better. And I like DragonBall Z. What a great place.
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#2
Would somebody please review my join application because I'm ready to write =)
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#3
Sorry, I was trying to mess with this when I got a phone call, but you should be good to go. I didn't get a chance to look at the details but it seems overall fine. I'll have to let a mod or someone get your roster setup though, but I'll try to change your name over.
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#4
You can't start with those moves, they're abilities. Pick something like Kamehameha, or finger beam, or make something up that won't be too powerful, a power up, or use elemental energy.

I'll PM you your training pass, make a character vault in the update board with your new moves.
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