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Joining As Goku Jr.
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Character: Goku Jr.
Fighting Style: quick/ childish
Planet: (Earth, Namek, or Vegeta) Vegeta
E-mail: mike-pride@hotmail.com
Starting Moves: Kamehameha (will make up 2 if able to join)

Roleplay Sample:

The kid looked over his shoulder. Could it truly be over all ready? Did he lose? Why is this happening? Had all of his training been for nothing? If so, then why did it have to happen this way?

Goku Jr looked towards the sky and saw only white clouds. A bluish haze lingered around the outskirts, but nothing short of nothingless awaited him. He had been defeated by a shadow, his shadow, and now it looked like there was nothing left for him but to accept defeat.

“I will not lose!” he cried out in terror, realizing the implications of his defeat. “I can’t let this happen. Master, you’re going down even if it’s the last thing I do on this earth!”

Cupping his hands together, the mighty youth began to power up his omega beam, but then, at the very last moment, he changed his mind. He felt a bit old fashioned and this move would surely do the trick with the right amount of force.

“KA!”

He paused and looked at the fighter before him, who was getting ready for the blast. Whether he knew what was coming or not, the youngling did not now, but things were going down and they were going down fast.

“ME! HA! ME!”

One last brief pause and then:

“HA!”

The massive energy wave tore through the air and devoured his master. The much taller and elder male was engulfed in ki as his apprentice pushed with the last bit of his might.

“Just die already!”

The master smiled and unleashed a wall of energy that disrupted the blast and with one swift motion, he layed out his friend.

Goku Jr fell to his back once more and stared bright eyed into the sky.

It was over for him and he knew it now.

Darkness quickly over came him and Goku Jr passed out.
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#2
Hello?
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#3
Sorry about the wait. Your RP was good, just a little barren. Paragraphs are usually 2-3 sentences. Try adding detail, thought, and feelings to your RP. Some depth can go a long way.

Make sure you make up a character vault and post it in the updates board.

Your roster will be here: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=22374
You can train every sunday here: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=109
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#4
Aweseome. Thank you.
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