08-11-2006, 07:08 PM
((I'd list some c&c on this.))
Planet Vegeta, home of the notorious Saiyan race. It?s race of monkeys, as many people refer to them as. However, no one can deny the fact that their battle tactics are superior to all others. They were meant for fighting. They are the warrior race of the universe. With every generation of Saiyans there is a new generation of powerful warriors just waiting to be unleashed upon the galaxy.
However, not all Saiyans were meant to be the brilliant leaders and generals that their blood intended them to be. Only the fighters with a great mind and calm persona towards his followers were the leaders. However, there were many people with those traits on the monkey infested planet. But some weren?t the leading type, but rather the following type, the type of warriors that needed to be motivated by a brilliant speech, or needed someone to idolize. Torah fell in that category.
He was a powerful Saiyan warrior that was respected by all on the planet. He had earned his reputation by rising through the multiple ranks, becoming a captain. However, he ignored the rank that he had earned. People thought that he was a brilliant leader, but he was nothing close. Every mission he had done individually had utterly failed. And every mission where he was assigned a team that he was to be the commander of was decimated. He had proven countless times that he wasn?t made to be a key decision maker under pressure.
On another note though, he had proven to be a valuable warrior when alongside his accomplice and close friend, Bardock. The two had gone on countless escapades together and had succeeded in a large amount of them. They had been the tandem that was feared throughout the galaxy for their intelligence and brute force. Torah was the hammer. Bardock was the blacksmith.
The last adventure the two had together had failed though, and miserably at that. They traveled to the distant planet of Gnarafan. The people there were seemingly weak, but proved that their kind nature wasn?t their only trademark. They were extremely powerful. But with that said, Bardock?s crew could have defeated their entire militia, but failed. Torah had given him bad advice. It was a first from the quiet Saiyan, but it proved to be the only one necessary to be worthy of an ass kicking from the mysterious race.
_ _ _ _ _ _
Torah finally opened his eyes. It had been a full week since he last took a glimpse of anything. The assault from the Gnara-Jin army had proven to be lethal. He had almost been killed. Luckily for him, Bardock got him and the rest of his squad back to planet Vegeta in time for his life to be saved. Rejuvenation chambers had proven to be a nice
commodity.
The scientist at the control panel of the chamber grinned as he looked at Torah. ?Yes, he is going to make a full recovery,? he thought to himself as he began to click various buttons on the panel. ?You?re a lucky guy,? he shouted out to Torah, who was still realizing where he was.
Planet Vegeta, home of the notorious Saiyan race. It?s race of monkeys, as many people refer to them as. However, no one can deny the fact that their battle tactics are superior to all others. They were meant for fighting. They are the warrior race of the universe. With every generation of Saiyans there is a new generation of powerful warriors just waiting to be unleashed upon the galaxy.
However, not all Saiyans were meant to be the brilliant leaders and generals that their blood intended them to be. Only the fighters with a great mind and calm persona towards his followers were the leaders. However, there were many people with those traits on the monkey infested planet. But some weren?t the leading type, but rather the following type, the type of warriors that needed to be motivated by a brilliant speech, or needed someone to idolize. Torah fell in that category.
He was a powerful Saiyan warrior that was respected by all on the planet. He had earned his reputation by rising through the multiple ranks, becoming a captain. However, he ignored the rank that he had earned. People thought that he was a brilliant leader, but he was nothing close. Every mission he had done individually had utterly failed. And every mission where he was assigned a team that he was to be the commander of was decimated. He had proven countless times that he wasn?t made to be a key decision maker under pressure.
On another note though, he had proven to be a valuable warrior when alongside his accomplice and close friend, Bardock. The two had gone on countless escapades together and had succeeded in a large amount of them. They had been the tandem that was feared throughout the galaxy for their intelligence and brute force. Torah was the hammer. Bardock was the blacksmith.
The last adventure the two had together had failed though, and miserably at that. They traveled to the distant planet of Gnarafan. The people there were seemingly weak, but proved that their kind nature wasn?t their only trademark. They were extremely powerful. But with that said, Bardock?s crew could have defeated their entire militia, but failed. Torah had given him bad advice. It was a first from the quiet Saiyan, but it proved to be the only one necessary to be worthy of an ass kicking from the mysterious race.
_ _ _ _ _ _
Torah finally opened his eyes. It had been a full week since he last took a glimpse of anything. The assault from the Gnara-Jin army had proven to be lethal. He had almost been killed. Luckily for him, Bardock got him and the rest of his squad back to planet Vegeta in time for his life to be saved. Rejuvenation chambers had proven to be a nice
commodity.
The scientist at the control panel of the chamber grinned as he looked at Torah. ?Yes, he is going to make a full recovery,? he thought to himself as he began to click various buttons on the panel. ?You?re a lucky guy,? he shouted out to Torah, who was still realizing where he was.
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Placed 3rd in Dante's Abyss 08