12-15-2006, 04:51 AM
So over the time I've been here I've created a new moves. Some of them havent beeen checked through staff yet of course. I've compiled a list of moves and put them in different catagories.
Which Category do you think I should perhaps try to all get for Retane first? Or maybe theres a certain few from each of them that you'd pick for Retane to earn? Opinions? Veiws?
Senses
Silencer- Retane puts a finger to his lips and with a simple "Shhhh". the target that heres it becomes deaf for a temporary time.
Thunder Clap: After learning Namekian Body Size Control, Retnae develops a technique by spreading his arms, enlarging his hands and slamming them together. Upon doing so, the Thunder Clap will hurt the foes ear drums so bad that it will bring almost any foe to it's knees.
Super Flare- a stronger version of Solar Blast but blinds the foe for more then a few simple seconds.
Orbs
Shadow Orb: Retane surrounds himself with a black orb. This orb has the ability to deflect small attacks. Also, you can't see through it, unless you are on the insside, this allows for an extra measure for Retane to form a surprise attack and unleash it as he lets the defensive manuever fall.
Magicians Orb- Retane creates multiple shadow orbs, around a small area. Once incompassed in one, he can transport/telport himself from any of the orbs created.
Mind games
City of Shadows- Retane is able to turn the area into a replica of Trion, the city that was made into a ghost town by the mercenary. (Kinda like how Babidi could change the places and shit.) But in the town are the lost souls killed by Retane(May have to make a seperate move for it. They are weak but scary...)
Hollagram- Retane uses his mind to create a hollagram of whatever, which is very much passable.
Solidify- Combined with Hollagram, the mercenary can make the hollagrams solid.
Dark attacks
Demented Portal- A move in which Retane creates a see through portal in front of him. If a blast goes through it coming at Retane's side, the Ki and attack is weakene and slowed. If a an attack comes through the side Retane started at when he created it, the attack and Ki are incresed in speed and strength.
Fear- A simple black blast from the mouth, being his with the blast causes the target to become paranoid and fearfull of all around him for a temporary time.
Black Fang- Through a simple bite, Retane releases a toxin that makes the victim forget what has happened a few hours before and after.
Soul of Retane- The mercenary digs deep down inside himself and creates a giant wolf. The wolf it's elf can only shooot your basic orbs and beams. Retane is weakend greatly from the manuver.
Trained
Stealth- After much training Retane can simply look at a spot and create a a ki orb and send it at its foe. (Used to combine with other moves)
Windstorm- Retane places one arm across his chest and the other in front of him. He rolls them over each other in a 360 roll and takes one arm to his side with what seems like wind whilring around his forearm. Thisattack can be either shot, at the foe, which the winds are razor sharp(Like Pikkons Hyper tornado), or used to propel other attacks from the arm into faster speeds.
Combo: Pressurize- Combining Windstorm with stealth he could make a feild of orbs which on contact send you flying in the oppisite direct. Ki attacks too.
Ki Trap- Placing his hands intfron t of his chest and interlock the thumbs, Retane can turn his hands to the ground and create a hidden trap. If anyone, even retane steps upon the trap, a feild of ki will surround them and entrap them. A littlew bit of power can take it out from within, but the outside of the trap is actually weak, allwoing time to get a move off before the trapped foe escapes.
Melee
Ki Tonfa/Duo Axe: Similar to the Ki Sword, Retane forms two melee weapons of Ki that extend about a foot off his forearm. at the end of the attack are small battle axe blades. To keep the enemy a little bit further from him, Retane can flip them over and use them as small battle axes.
Chains- Retane throws out his arms and long black coils form from his palms, three coils per hand. The long 'chains' are whipped around like weapons, lashing his opponents. The black coils attack at a long melee distance, but strike with the force of energy attacks. If a direct hit is successful, and the target is close enough, the coils can temporarily wrap around a section of the opponent and hold it (ie- an arm, so it can't block, etc.), making areas of the body vulnerable to attack from the other coils.
Electric Zap: Strings of ki stem it from Retane's fingers and wrap around a foe. As they do, The foe gets shocked and Retane drains their ki for himself in the process.
Ki Cuffs- An attack in which Retane's hands glow with Ki, if he hanages to grab ahold of his foe's wrists, ankles, neck, he locks his Ki cufs around the area. The cuffs hinder use of ki to be released from the hands, feet or mouth(depending on where the cugss are) It doesnt, however hinder physical attacks and a simple ki blast to the cuffs would relaes the cuffs hold
When Darness meets light.
Polar Eclipse- Forming a solar blast into one had and a dark shadow orb in the other, Retane attempts to press the opposites together infront of him. As he does and the force increases, a beam fires at his target, continuing for as long as Retane can hold the polar opposites trogether.
Negative Exclipse- Similar to Polar Eclipse, when Retane holds the two together, he becomes a sort of a magnet and repels Ki attacks and people from getting to close.
Note: Chains was created by Minoshia
Which Category do you think I should perhaps try to all get for Retane first? Or maybe theres a certain few from each of them that you'd pick for Retane to earn? Opinions? Veiws?
Senses
Silencer- Retane puts a finger to his lips and with a simple "Shhhh". the target that heres it becomes deaf for a temporary time.
Thunder Clap: After learning Namekian Body Size Control, Retnae develops a technique by spreading his arms, enlarging his hands and slamming them together. Upon doing so, the Thunder Clap will hurt the foes ear drums so bad that it will bring almost any foe to it's knees.
Super Flare- a stronger version of Solar Blast but blinds the foe for more then a few simple seconds.
Orbs
Shadow Orb: Retane surrounds himself with a black orb. This orb has the ability to deflect small attacks. Also, you can't see through it, unless you are on the insside, this allows for an extra measure for Retane to form a surprise attack and unleash it as he lets the defensive manuever fall.
Magicians Orb- Retane creates multiple shadow orbs, around a small area. Once incompassed in one, he can transport/telport himself from any of the orbs created.
Mind games
City of Shadows- Retane is able to turn the area into a replica of Trion, the city that was made into a ghost town by the mercenary. (Kinda like how Babidi could change the places and shit.) But in the town are the lost souls killed by Retane(May have to make a seperate move for it. They are weak but scary...)
Hollagram- Retane uses his mind to create a hollagram of whatever, which is very much passable.
Solidify- Combined with Hollagram, the mercenary can make the hollagrams solid.
Dark attacks
Demented Portal- A move in which Retane creates a see through portal in front of him. If a blast goes through it coming at Retane's side, the Ki and attack is weakene and slowed. If a an attack comes through the side Retane started at when he created it, the attack and Ki are incresed in speed and strength.
Fear- A simple black blast from the mouth, being his with the blast causes the target to become paranoid and fearfull of all around him for a temporary time.
Black Fang- Through a simple bite, Retane releases a toxin that makes the victim forget what has happened a few hours before and after.
Soul of Retane- The mercenary digs deep down inside himself and creates a giant wolf. The wolf it's elf can only shooot your basic orbs and beams. Retane is weakend greatly from the manuver.
Trained
Stealth- After much training Retane can simply look at a spot and create a a ki orb and send it at its foe. (Used to combine with other moves)
Windstorm- Retane places one arm across his chest and the other in front of him. He rolls them over each other in a 360 roll and takes one arm to his side with what seems like wind whilring around his forearm. Thisattack can be either shot, at the foe, which the winds are razor sharp(Like Pikkons Hyper tornado), or used to propel other attacks from the arm into faster speeds.
Combo: Pressurize- Combining Windstorm with stealth he could make a feild of orbs which on contact send you flying in the oppisite direct. Ki attacks too.
Ki Trap- Placing his hands intfron t of his chest and interlock the thumbs, Retane can turn his hands to the ground and create a hidden trap. If anyone, even retane steps upon the trap, a feild of ki will surround them and entrap them. A littlew bit of power can take it out from within, but the outside of the trap is actually weak, allwoing time to get a move off before the trapped foe escapes.
Melee
Ki Tonfa/Duo Axe: Similar to the Ki Sword, Retane forms two melee weapons of Ki that extend about a foot off his forearm. at the end of the attack are small battle axe blades. To keep the enemy a little bit further from him, Retane can flip them over and use them as small battle axes.
Chains- Retane throws out his arms and long black coils form from his palms, three coils per hand. The long 'chains' are whipped around like weapons, lashing his opponents. The black coils attack at a long melee distance, but strike with the force of energy attacks. If a direct hit is successful, and the target is close enough, the coils can temporarily wrap around a section of the opponent and hold it (ie- an arm, so it can't block, etc.), making areas of the body vulnerable to attack from the other coils.
Electric Zap: Strings of ki stem it from Retane's fingers and wrap around a foe. As they do, The foe gets shocked and Retane drains their ki for himself in the process.
Ki Cuffs- An attack in which Retane's hands glow with Ki, if he hanages to grab ahold of his foe's wrists, ankles, neck, he locks his Ki cufs around the area. The cuffs hinder use of ki to be released from the hands, feet or mouth(depending on where the cugss are) It doesnt, however hinder physical attacks and a simple ki blast to the cuffs would relaes the cuffs hold
When Darness meets light.
Polar Eclipse- Forming a solar blast into one had and a dark shadow orb in the other, Retane attempts to press the opposites together infront of him. As he does and the force increases, a beam fires at his target, continuing for as long as Retane can hold the polar opposites trogether.
Negative Exclipse- Similar to Polar Eclipse, when Retane holds the two together, he becomes a sort of a magnet and repels Ki attacks and people from getting to close.
Note: Chains was created by Minoshia
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