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[C&C] Chase - Chase - 09-13-2009
Was it something I said?
Also, his bio in my profile would be useful for starters.
Don't have any other posts yet, still forming the basis of the character for another 5 or so posts, after which I'll start with character development.
I'm looking for some comments or criticism on the storyline and character themselves, not really on the grammar/expression side of it all. I know I've got tons of badly worded sentences, paragraphs and such, however a more pressing issue is if the image I'm trying to send out is as coherent as it looks in my head.
This is basically the first character that I have ever made that I can't identify with. In the sense that, he isn't my polar opposite, nor is he similar to me, or a self-insertion persona. He is different from me in both reactions, and way of thinking. I think I can understand what he would do in most situations, hence being able to write as him, however the way I put it in words might not come across as such.
I'm still molding him into who I think he should be.
Any comments and such are welcome. Please and thanks.