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joining - Krillin - 05-02-2006
That roleplay example is not good enough. You are free to try again if you'd like, and perhaps check a few of the roleplays on the site to see how we write.
I highly recommend finding a good primer on English grammar/punctuation/capitalization, mastering it, then moving on to hours of practice. Then, re-apply.
joining - Android-18 - 05-05-2006
I'm sorry but it just isn't up to our standards. Try using Microsoft word, learn to use paragraphs and proper dialogue structure. Overall you need a lot of practice.