My Idea, help me.

[Tamsin]

Originally posted by Furiza
What catches people's attention? Not a WWII era story.

Depends on how you write it....

I would say that I do not like peopel trying to write about war, unless they have endured it themselves. =(

My story will not be about acts it will be about a persons feelings and thoughs. I read a lot of great stories about wars. Here are examples

Like I said, my story wont be about acts. I admit "wars will never get into books" and ill never really know the horror those soldiers went trough. But I still think I can write a war story, if im trying to point out about something. Im not trying to dishonor my ancestors who fought and died in these wars, im just trying to point out that nothing is what it seems.....at least thats going to be the main message of my story.

[Tamsin]

Allrighty. My story is set in September, 1944 in Holland. My main character Martin Zuse, is a german paratrooper (Fallschirmjager). However at that time he is simply guarding a bridge (beacuse german paratroopers while they werent parachuting were elite infantry). Unfortunately, he is guarding a bridge which is one of the objectives of operation Market Garden. Basicly thats the plot. YOu might think there will be lot of happening since it will be an assault. Well no there wont be much happening. The main topic will be Martins feelings and thoughts about the world around him, that has gone insane.

[Tamsin]

Originally posted by Furiza
It could work as a short story, but I think if you were gonna make it into an interesting novel you'd have to either have something else happen;
Ie; Keep Martin at the bridge with his feelings, but change perspective to tell about those linked to him like family, friends etc.

Thats exactly what im intending. And it will be a short story.....i doubt the school press could print a long one

[Hellfighter 17]

Short stories do not have to be short, they can be 50 pages long, or more o.0

[Abel]

It's nice of you all to share your stories and all...but I still need help =/

[Hellfighter 17]

What do you even need help with now.

[Abel]

Where should the people she finds be located? I'm not sure yet...

What do they have to do to get out?

What will the prisoners be running through?

[Hellfighter 17]

I think she should round a up a group of them and bring them to the desert at night. And have it as a a circumstance so that they can try to escape her, but at daylight, animals will come out that can kill them. So they can give up and let her catch them, or they can just keep going and have the animals find them, or if they are lucky, they can get out.

[Ruhiel]

Ok, heres some of my ideas.

I really have no idea where the people she finds will be at. Sorry

Well, if you go with the shipyard thing, maybe, the wolf says they have a certain amount of time to try and get to the exit before the gate closes and locks. Then, they're pretty much dead.

To get to the exit, why not have like a bunch of those old barge containers (ya know, they look kinda like railroad cars, but without the wheels, and a little smaller) acting like walls through a kind of maze. If they go the wrong way, they run into some kind of trap, or maybe the wolf gets em.

Idk, that's all I've got.

Oh, and 14, no I'm not from Maine. I'm from Kentucky. (AND NO THAT DOESN'T MEAN I'M A HICK! I swear if anyone pulls that number...)

[Abel]

Originally posted by Android 20
Ok, heres some of my ideas.

I really have no idea where the people she finds will be at. Sorry

Well, if you go with the shipyard thing, maybe, the wolf says they have a certain amount of time to try and get to the exit before the gate closes and locks. Then, they're pretty much dead.

To get to the exit, why not have like a bunch of those old barge containers (ya know, they look kinda like railroad cars, but without the wheels, and a little smaller) acting like walls through a kind of maze. If they go the wrong way, they run into some kind of trap, or maybe the wolf gets em.

Idk, that's all I've got.

Oh, and 14, no I'm not from Maine. I'm from Kentucky. (AND NO THAT DOESN'T MEAN I'M A HICK! I swear if anyone pulls that number...)

Again, that sounds like Saw when the guy had to get through the razers to the door before the timer was over or it was locked, also the chick with the thing on.

[Ruhiel]

-.-

I gotta quit doing that...

[Android-18]

Watch The Cube.

[Ruhiel]

There's a lot of movies out there that people should have never made, such as that horrible one called "Envy".

I think his idea has potential to be good, he just needs to work on it some more.

[Abel]

Originally posted by Furiza
Tapion, you need a more original idea. Nobody would make your film, as the idea isn't one that really sets it aside from anything else.

I would make my film. I have resources. And Bojack...suck. it.


I asked for help, this will turn into something better, this is just the starting idea. And remember, it was like 3 in the morning when i came up with this out of nowhere while watching people play a game. Any REASONABLE suggestions/ideas should be posted, I need more ideas please. Make this in a mature fashion at least...

[Ruhiel]

Anyways, Tapion, just try to make the plot be a little bit more coherent, and add a bit more suspense, and it'd be a pretty good movie.

[Abel]

I could create the movie and it could look like shit. =/

[Abel]

I never asked if you liked it. And you are insulting me by saying nobody would see it or read it. Though, that is something you do not know because you don't even know everything about it yet. So if you aren't going to help me, then don't post here.

[Vegeta]

stop fighting