A Little Reveiw?

[Veritas]

I was just wondering what others thought about my current posts for telepathy. What I would need to improve on or what I'm doing completely wrong lol that kind of thing. However, if your going to look at it and everything please keep in mind that this training confuses the hell out of me on where to start and such, so many of my posts are short. .

Finding One's Self

[Veritas]

No C&C for me ? lol. .

I posted a few more times so if anyone's up for the task please choose one the last few to give C&C to.

[Dehan]

I'm enjoyin it, keep it up.

[Veritas]

Yay I have a fan .

[Veritas]

Woohoo two fans!

[Veritas]

Thats good enough 8). Thanks for the pointers also

[Veritas]

Few new posts, C&C por favor .

[Saz]

I don't know about C&C but you sure are active, I commend you for that, I know how differcult it is to stay motivated when rping by yourself. I'll read through some of it and try and see whether I can offer any pointers.

[Veritas]

Thanks man I realy appreciate.

[Veritas]

Two new posts...any thoughts?

[Veritas]

What do you guys think about the way I did things so far...what do you guys think I should've done differently and such?

[Alsa]

Getting better, you've improved alot. 9.2/10

[Veritas]

Thanks.