My Namekian Quest

[Banned Dana]

Well, I finally finished my Namek Quest: Weather Patterns.

I think that it was good, I really liked the ending. I made it slightly different than the actual storyline.

The storyline that I believe it was supposed to be about was just relocating a village from a disasterous location, full of really bad weather.

My storyline was a little more in depth. I made it so that an evil Namek and Sayajin could control weather and after they attacked a village, they left a case of very bad weather to cover up their tracks.

In the story I used a fake character: Lari, leader of the lost village.

I also used two NPC characters: Placo and Charango. They used their actually attributes though and they weren't a really big part of the story.

I would just like to know what you guys thought of it.

Thanks!

[Alura]

I'm gonna let Kami grade it, simply because I know he's a big fan of people using quests as storylines, and he's probably the most generous when it comes to grading quests.

With that said, excellent job