The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story

[Hellfighter 17]

Wow, I really liked that. Pan said what I was going to say. It is very well-written all over...?

[Sage]

I read it, I just didn't have anything particularly relevant to say.

It's good.

I just have one qaulm. "Bdu" should be "BDU", since it stands for Battle Dress Uniform. And usually acronyms are in all caps. =\

Other than that, ...yeah.

[Sage]

Originally posted by Lunch
Thats really good. ^^!!!

Mmm, revived a dead thread, you did.

Hurt you for this, people might.

(Don't revive dead threads, j0)