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Save the trees!
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#1
10-20-2006, 06:11 PM
Seriously though, I got a project for school, I need to make a vector on the following theme: "Save the trees." Corny, yea...

This is my basic sketch + shading added (Note that this is the 1st time I ever vectored without an image to go off of...

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What do you think? C&C please.

Also, what do you think I should improve?


(It's up on my DeviantArt page btw, if anyone wants the name, tell me.)
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10-20-2006, 06:12 PM
What happened to it, I cant see it.
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10-20-2006, 06:14 PM
Crap, I'm editing the correct img in.

Stupid ImageShack is now down...
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10-20-2006, 06:19 PM
For the fact that it's school and I hate school I'd leave it, but Mayb give the guy a mouth..umm..more detail on the tree..IDk what else I like it though not bad for your first one without an image to go off of. Big Grin
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10-20-2006, 06:24 PM
Yeah, I'm going to have to completely redo the tree, like I did to the paper.....thrice.. >_>

Also, how would his mouth be? Like (:- |) or (:- () ?
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10-20-2006, 06:27 PM
i think a sad face would be appropriate Sad
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10-20-2006, 06:35 PM
Alright I'll add it in next morning. I'll redo the tree too.

Hell, probably redo the whole pic excepting the guy who I think looks really good (don't you?).
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10-20-2006, 06:40 PM
yeah, why re-do it all, personally I dont think it's bad, but its up to you.
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10-20-2006, 06:43 PM
I think it looks fine how it is. The expressionless face kind of leaves room for the imagination, the expression is in the eyes.


And is it me, or does those hills in the background look like asscheeks?

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10-20-2006, 06:44 PM
yes it does look like asscheeks lol

Edit: which is not a bad thing. Big Grin
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10-20-2006, 06:53 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Violet
I think it looks fine how it is. The expressionless face kind of leaves room for the imagination, the expression is in the eyes.


And is it me, or does those hills in the background look like asscheeks?

I hoped you wouldn't notice until I got to redoing them...it! ... I'll just redo the background/tree, because I'm not pleased with how it all blends right now. I got all the paths (all 42) still saved in the .psd, and I'll simply delete everything I don't need, and redo it....

Also, DA ID -> SSJokker

That's where I'll do the minor updates and keep it posted...
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10-22-2006, 06:23 PM
/dubblet

[Image: treelb9.jpg]

Went for a less cartoonish feel.

(Inspired from ctrl-alt-del art if you can't tell...)

C&C please? (I know I messed up 2 things...the shoes and the paper, which I'll redo....but not now...)
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10-23-2006, 05:39 AM
aww no buttcheeks lol, It looks good I like how there is only a branch there and the rest of the land is treeless, and whats with the random spider web?

Edit: not that its bad I was just wondering out loud.
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10-23-2006, 06:32 AM
Uh, the spider web means he's been standing there for...a while...

And there will be trees just...not...yet...
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10-23-2006, 06:38 AM
oh...I didnt mean it sarcastically I actually like it, because it shows the paper there and no trees, adding to the point your trying to get across. Dont you think? Eh edit it if you want to it is your work. :] Just try your best it'll turn out great.
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