Yamcha vs Paragus

[Shun]

I was wondering if I could get some C&C on my posts on the spar. I didn't like how mine were at all but I figured it wouldn't hurt to get other peoples opinions. My last post was...idk I just wanted to get it over with, it took longer than expected. Anyway I know you guys don't wanna know how I felt before/ after and about my own posts lol so here is the spar

[Dehan]

8/10. Pretty good wolf dude.

[Tempo]

i dont want to make a seperate thread but would any one mind giving my part some C&C as well.

Yamcha let me just add that it was great sparring you and i would be happy to do it again sometime.

[Shun]

This was a while ago..but I am still wondering what people thought. So.....
*BUMP*

@Turles: thanks man

[OldNoriAccount]

6/10

I know you can do better Yamcha. You did better when you fought me.

Or at least, thats my opinion.

[Shun]

I don't know what it was, but I think my spar with you was my best writing lol IDK
(sigh)
thanks Akane I will try to do better.

[Shun]

Just because it was mentioned I was wondering if anyone would like to give C-N-C on my 2 posts on this as well.

Yamcha Vs. Akane

I figured put int in here to not waste another thread.