08-03-2009, 03:08 AM
The standard and obligatory C&C thread.
I am most interested in the thoughts upon my posts in the recent fight with Alexander Trafford:
http://cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=26298
I think these posts both display the depth of my character, Jonathan, and what I am attempting to do with my posts here; merge poetry and philosophy into writing that deals less with describing the physical movement or scenery of a character and more with the driving force and rhythm.
I'm interested in reactions both to my writing, in technique and style, and to Jonathan. In particular, I am terribly concerned with Jonathan being too perfect, too capable, too able. He is the embodiment of my understanding of Nietzsche's übermensch, and that can very easily lead to god-modding (which I am constantly aware of and am avoiding as much as possible, while staying true to Jonathan's roots).
What are your thoughts?
I am most interested in the thoughts upon my posts in the recent fight with Alexander Trafford:
http://cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread.php?t=26298
I think these posts both display the depth of my character, Jonathan, and what I am attempting to do with my posts here; merge poetry and philosophy into writing that deals less with describing the physical movement or scenery of a character and more with the driving force and rhythm.
I'm interested in reactions both to my writing, in technique and style, and to Jonathan. In particular, I am terribly concerned with Jonathan being too perfect, too capable, too able. He is the embodiment of my understanding of Nietzsche's übermensch, and that can very easily lead to god-modding (which I am constantly aware of and am avoiding as much as possible, while staying true to Jonathan's roots).
What are your thoughts?