01-22-2011, 03:03 AM
I like it, for the most part. To be honest I want to hear this message he's been attempting to preach. Maybe there isn't one, and there is something to be said about that. I liked the first posts a lot more than the later ones. Getting too stylistic honestly kills it for me. Too much "artsy"ness just makes me angry for some reason. It's nothing personal lol
It's a mental journey, certainly. If you're going for the fragmentation that you get from the short posts its working. You are piecing together a puzzle, I get that, but perhaps consider what good longer exposure might do you. Just a thought.
It's a mental journey, certainly. If you're going for the fragmentation that you get from the short posts its working. You are piecing together a puzzle, I get that, but perhaps consider what good longer exposure might do you. Just a thought.
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