Mal Nova:
Have you started using Word/Google Docs/Spellcheck? Because it really, honestly shows if you have. Everything seemed a lot more understandable than your work during the Invasion, and it makes it so much more enjoyable to read. I was a little confused by the vision at the end of your second post - you never said who it was, just that Mal knew her. The vision was clear, there was just no real exposition for the reader.
John Doe:
Oh man, I love John Doe so much. Your posts just ooze absurdity so well, especially with the Jonathan Doell alias in these fights. A downside to writing humorously is when the post falls flat, which, thankfully, doesn't happen that often with you. I would absolutely love to see a joint RP between Captain Edward Reynolds and John Doe sometime. I would probably laugh until it hurts and then laugh some more.
Eh, it's a tough choice, but I'm going to vote for Mal Nova due to the improvement in his writing that I noticed. He really stepped up his game, and I was pleasantly surprised. Doe, I do think your writing is stronger than his, but I felt like you didn't amp up as much as he did.
Have you started using Word/Google Docs/Spellcheck? Because it really, honestly shows if you have. Everything seemed a lot more understandable than your work during the Invasion, and it makes it so much more enjoyable to read. I was a little confused by the vision at the end of your second post - you never said who it was, just that Mal knew her. The vision was clear, there was just no real exposition for the reader.
John Doe:
Oh man, I love John Doe so much. Your posts just ooze absurdity so well, especially with the Jonathan Doell alias in these fights. A downside to writing humorously is when the post falls flat, which, thankfully, doesn't happen that often with you. I would absolutely love to see a joint RP between Captain Edward Reynolds and John Doe sometime. I would probably laugh until it hurts and then laugh some more.
Eh, it's a tough choice, but I'm going to vote for Mal Nova due to the improvement in his writing that I noticed. He really stepped up his game, and I was pleasantly surprised. Doe, I do think your writing is stronger than his, but I felt like you didn't amp up as much as he did.
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If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.
If life gives you lemons, hand them to me!
I've got a great recipe for lemon meringue pie.