[BT1] Mal Nova v John Doe Review

[Alexander Trafford]

Mal: Your writing is much improved as your grammar, spelling and sentence structure in general have improved. Your posts are a lot more readable, and they flow very well. Your best quality as a writer is that you're a great storyteller. You keep the pace moving and the action clear. Your descriptive ability is lacking at times but the pace and action you put into your posts is excellent. Nice job.

Doe: You're a funny writer. I like the creativity you put into your posts, it's very unique and I dig it. Your description is a bit lacking, but overall you are a very competent writer. Your style compliments this site well, it's very anime-ish, if that's teh word I'm looking for. Almost a DBZ-Roshi-Krilling hybrid maybe? I'm not sure. But as a serious, noire-style writer, watching you do what you do is just that more impressive.

Doe is, overall, a stronger writer, in terms of style, structure, etc. His description needs work. Mal is a better storyteller. It all comes down to personal preference. I honestly don't feel comfortable voting between the two. So I'm going with a No Vote. But if Meer would prefer that I vote, I can reevaluate my choices.