04-06-2011, 12:56 PM
Belle
You seemed to iron out some of the wrinkles you had against me. Everything seemed more fluent. You even captured Mal's character relatively well, which I personally think is difficult. There were more technical errors in this round (likde Alex said), but overall very pleasant to read.
Mal
You still steadily improving. The technical side seemed a little better. However, you only posted once. And, because of that, you lost browney points.
Belle gets my vote. Mostly by default. Shame too, because I thought Mal had a puncher's chance.
You seemed to iron out some of the wrinkles you had against me. Everything seemed more fluent. You even captured Mal's character relatively well, which I personally think is difficult. There were more technical errors in this round (likde Alex said), but overall very pleasant to read.
Mal
You still steadily improving. The technical side seemed a little better. However, you only posted once. And, because of that, you lost browney points.
Belle gets my vote. Mostly by default. Shame too, because I thought Mal had a puncher's chance.
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