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Fun with words
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Very good. Not many people could string together such a poem. The meaning was so much more deeper than the words displayed. I'm not good at commenting on poetry, but I liked it very much.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
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Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 01:46 AM
Fun with words - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-03-2004, 01:51 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 01:51 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 01:53 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 02:00 AM
Fun with words - by Rem-13 - 12-03-2004, 02:13 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 02:15 AM
Fun with words - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-03-2004, 02:16 AM
Fun with words - by Rem-13 - 12-03-2004, 02:20 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 02:21 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 02:50 AM

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