12-03-2004, 02:15 AM
What about the last line didn't you like? I had a hard time ending the poem, so go ahead and pick at it.
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DA08 Winner. "Screw them, this was her show now."
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Fun with words
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Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 01:46 AM
Fun with words - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-03-2004, 01:51 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 01:51 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 01:53 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 02:00 AM
Fun with words - by Rem-13 - 12-03-2004, 02:13 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 02:15 AM
Fun with words - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-03-2004, 02:16 AM
Fun with words - by Rem-13 - 12-03-2004, 02:20 AM
Fun with words - by Ander - 12-03-2004, 02:21 AM
Fun with words - by Claire - 12-03-2004, 02:50 AM
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