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The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story
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I read it, I just didn't have anything particularly relevant to say.

It's good.

I just have one qaulm. "Bdu" should be "BDU", since it stands for Battle Dress Uniform. And usually acronyms are in all caps. =\

Other than that, ...yeah.
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The Fallen Soldier. Non-DBZ- Short story - by Sage - 02-09-2005, 10:46 PM

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