Letter to Senator Jim Talent

[Hellfighter 17]

I like it. You went straight to the point and had good, convincing pieces of information. I noticed spelling/grammatical msitakes, but nothing much. The only thing, though, you jump from the players weages, then to the franchise's, then in your concluding paragrpah you say the players' wages should be cut back. That was a bit confusing, because you had more information on the franchise's amount of money made, instead of sticking to the players'.

Oh, yea, it's the 10th =\