02-10-2005, 11:34 PM
I made it before, that's why the date is off, and I just typed up my rough draft of my rough draft. Thanks for the compliments.
But we had to have 3 different contentions which are reasons why (Thesis statement here). And so my contentions were of how sports teams can't fill rosters to the ratio of education to salary is disporportioned, to the cost of broadcasting.
Then the concluding statement with the thesis statement again.
But we had to have 3 different contentions which are reasons why (Thesis statement here). And so my contentions were of how sports teams can't fill rosters to the ratio of education to salary is disporportioned, to the cost of broadcasting.
Then the concluding statement with the thesis statement again.
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