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Hmm...
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I just felt like writing something.


Time

Day by day
Hour by hour
Minute by minute
Second by second
Time is my enemy

Life passing by
Friends passing by
Opportunities passing by
Me passing by
Time is my enemy

Everybody leaving
Everybody changing
Everybody happy
Everybody gone
Time is my enemy

I am stuck here
I am the same
I am not happy
I am gone
Time is my enemy


Sorry for the crapiness.

BTW, I wouldn't mind some constructful criticism.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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Messages In This Thread
Hmm... - by Hellfighter 17 - 03-17-2005, 02:30 AM
Hmm... - by Claire - 03-17-2005, 09:21 PM
Hmm... - by Jonathan Meer - 03-18-2005, 02:56 AM
Hmm... - by Jonathan Meer - 03-19-2005, 10:11 PM
Hmm... - by Hellfighter 17 - 03-19-2005, 10:42 PM
Hmm... - by Jonathan Meer - 03-19-2005, 11:30 PM
Hmm... - by Hellfighter 17 - 03-20-2005, 02:19 AM

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