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Heavy Heart ~poem
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Each line varied strongly in number of syllables, and it progressed from stanza to stanza. It made me, when I read it, miss beats and accidentally add some. It kinda detracted from the overall feel.

But, like I said, I usually don't count out my syllables either, so don't worry about it too much. Today's poetry has strayed greatly from metrical accuracy.
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Heavy Heart ~poem - by Reijin - 12-07-2004, 11:57 PM
Heavy Heart ~poem - by Old Selipa - 12-08-2004, 12:53 AM
Heavy Heart ~poem - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-08-2004, 01:11 AM
Heavy Heart ~poem - by Old Selipa - 12-08-2004, 05:04 PM
Heavy Heart ~poem - by Krillin - 12-08-2004, 09:39 PM
Heavy Heart ~poem - by Krillin - 12-09-2004, 02:51 AM

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