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the fragile end
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07-26-2005, 10:30 PM
Honestly? I liked your "to a dying lover" better than this one. While you really got the message across well in this one, I just liked that other one better.

You did a good job, it's just that some of your analogies didn't seem to flow well with me. But that's just my opinion.
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the fragile end - by Vegeta - 07-23-2005, 01:12 AM
the fragile end - by Rem-13 - 07-23-2005, 05:06 AM
the fragile end - by Vegeta - 07-23-2005, 09:46 AM
the fragile end - by Hellfighter 17 - 07-23-2005, 12:15 PM
the fragile end - by Kami - 07-23-2005, 08:34 PM
the fragile end - by Vegeta - 07-26-2005, 10:23 PM
the fragile end - by Ruhiel - 07-26-2005, 10:30 PM
the fragile end - by Hellfighter 17 - 07-27-2005, 12:15 AM

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