05-22-2006, 02:35 AM
Okay, I laughed like crazy when I read the Oozaru-Konat part.
Nothing like a mistake jumped out at me, and I don't read your stuff often, so I was hit with all the improvements you've made since the last time I really went through one of your RP's. You use description, but not too much to be boring, but enough to paint a picture.
You did good with the comedy.
Anywho, right on...Or something...Write on? >.<
Nothing like a mistake jumped out at me, and I don't read your stuff often, so I was hit with all the improvements you've made since the last time I really went through one of your RP's. You use description, but not too much to be boring, but enough to paint a picture.
You did good with the comedy.
Anywho, right on...Or something...Write on? >.<