12-07-2005, 02:33 AM
One thing I *always* have issues with and that my writing teacher always points out (I noticed because of Bardock's mention of your quoting) is how I do my lead ins for the quote. Try leading in a quote other than the simplistic "he said/she said/he yelled/she roared."
Again, something I have to deal with myself, but yeah...
Again, something I have to deal with myself, but yeah...

