03-16-2006, 04:34 AM
The Last Dance of Fire(Spiritken Training)
It's not done yet. I am sort of taking it slow and trying not to make it all battle based, but also based on the relationships Spice forms with people. It will heat up soon though. I have it all layed out in my head.
But for now, I could use some C&C on what I got. If you would be so kind, but it's up to you.
It's not done yet. I am sort of taking it slow and trying not to make it all battle based, but also based on the relationships Spice forms with people. It will heat up soon though. I have it all layed out in my head.
But for now, I could use some C&C on what I got. If you would be so kind, but it's up to you.
If I were a creeper I would hide in... your closet. Or under your bed, you know, depending on the weather.