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@Retane:

Not bad. Your description is good, and your flashback was a tidy little way to break up the 'here-and-now' of your post. To be honest, it seemed pretty dry otherwise, but that's not too bad, since most of us (including me) are, as Rad already said, shaking off rust. I'm sure if you find a way to jazz things up a little - and it shouldn't be too hard - you'll do just fine in DA.

Bahaha!

My turn, even though it wasn't that good:

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