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05-23-2007, 12:15 AM
Most of it felt more like someone was dictating it to me rather than me reading. It didn't really have any strong voice that overwhelmed me when I read it. And most importantly, I didn't feel compelled to keep reading. It was one of those read, wait, and forget RPs that will imminently evaporate from my memory. Saw a few grammar mistakes too, if they mean anything to you.

6.5/10, if you want my personal rating.


Uh . . . Don't need c&c. I am comfortable with my work.
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