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Originally posted by Celipa
Nice. I've been following what's been happening to Gokua, and I particularly liked your immediate follow-up post to the event more-so than this one. I think that delving more into Gokua's thoughts in the last post would've made it more appealing.

Day One: Morning

Mine?

I rike. I think your writing style has improved massively; the piece just seemed to flow without me jarring on anything. At the same time it was quirky, and gave a good impression of Celipa's carefree attitude. Other than that not much to say, since it was mainly a follow-up post and so on. It'll be interesting to see how Celipa reacts to the competition as it goes on and whether her personality changes or we see any rising plotlines =o

Day One: Morning C&C? Most of my roleplays thus far have been 'setup' with the actual progression to come later (I do have stuff planned), but I'd like to get some feedback on how I'm holding up so far.