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05-25-2007, 01:46 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Super Buu
Quote:Originally posted by Zangya
Quote:Originally posted by Super Buu

Day One: Morning C&C?
EDIT: Nvm.
If you already wrote something, feel free. I'm not gonna turn down bonus feedback Wink
It's the one about you looking over Paige's body, right? Well, that was well done. I, personally, prefer medium length posts over shorter or longer posts, but considering you're probably trying to appeal to Burter, I could live with it. It seemed to delve into both sides of Super Buu's personality, and I believe that delving into one in particular, fleshing it out, and then using it wisely, it could turn into a real evil character, or a real good character. Also, love the humor. Smile

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See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-09-2007, 04:40 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-09-2007, 04:41 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 04:49 AM
See ehn See - by Olibu - 05-09-2007, 05:17 AM
See ehn See - by Bojack - 05-09-2007, 06:41 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 06:49 AM
See ehn See - by Bojack - 05-09-2007, 06:51 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-09-2007, 06:53 AM
See ehn See - by Android-18 - 05-09-2007, 06:53 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 06:53 AM
See ehn See - by Reijin - 05-09-2007, 08:32 AM
See ehn See - by Grandpa Gohan - 05-09-2007, 10:17 PM
See ehn See - by Whompt - 05-10-2007, 12:41 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-10-2007, 12:49 AM
See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-10-2007, 01:06 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-10-2007, 03:34 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-11-2007, 01:53 AM
See ehn See - by Kirano - 05-11-2007, 02:01 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-11-2007, 02:02 AM
See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-11-2007, 02:03 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-11-2007, 02:04 AM
See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-11-2007, 02:09 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-11-2007, 02:51 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-11-2007, 02:56 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-11-2007, 02:58 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-11-2007, 03:01 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-11-2007, 03:05 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-11-2007, 12:42 PM
See ehn See - by Minoshia - 05-12-2007, 02:31 PM
See ehn See - by King Cold444 - 05-12-2007, 03:43 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-13-2007, 05:10 AM
See ehn See - by Bra - 05-13-2007, 11:20 PM
See ehn See - by Bojack - 05-13-2007, 11:30 PM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-13-2007, 11:39 PM
See ehn See - by Bojack - 05-13-2007, 11:49 PM
See ehn See - by Tobias - 05-14-2007, 03:46 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-14-2007, 04:57 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-14-2007, 05:27 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-15-2007, 08:52 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-16-2007, 02:11 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-16-2007, 05:39 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-16-2007, 05:42 AM
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See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-16-2007, 06:03 AM
See ehn See - by OldSpice - 05-17-2007, 12:05 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-17-2007, 12:15 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-17-2007, 01:04 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-17-2007, 01:06 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-17-2007, 01:20 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-17-2007, 01:31 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-17-2007, 01:36 AM
See ehn See - by OldSpice - 05-17-2007, 02:22 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-17-2007, 02:47 AM
See ehn See - by OldSpice - 05-17-2007, 02:51 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-17-2007, 02:57 AM
See ehn See - by Nappa - 05-17-2007, 03:16 AM
See ehn See - by Deo - 05-22-2007, 02:10 AM
See ehn See - by Jeice - 05-22-2007, 02:26 AM
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See ehn See - by Yamu - 05-22-2007, 02:15 PM
See ehn See - by Deo - 05-22-2007, 11:17 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-23-2007, 12:15 AM
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See ehn See - by Jeice - 05-23-2007, 12:29 AM
See ehn See - by Nappa - 05-23-2007, 02:19 AM
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See ehn See - by Android-18 - 05-23-2007, 06:23 AM
See ehn See - by Deo - 05-23-2007, 11:16 PM
See ehn See - by Minoshia - 05-24-2007, 01:00 AM
See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-24-2007, 01:15 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-24-2007, 02:14 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-24-2007, 12:32 PM
See ehn See - by Celipa - 05-24-2007, 11:34 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-24-2007, 11:37 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-25-2007, 12:46 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-25-2007, 12:47 AM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-25-2007, 01:37 AM
See ehn See - by Bra - 05-25-2007, 01:38 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 01:39 AM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-25-2007, 01:43 AM
See ehn See - by Bra - 05-25-2007, 01:43 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 01:46 AM
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See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-25-2007, 02:02 AM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 05-25-2007, 02:03 AM
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See ehn See - by Orion - 05-25-2007, 04:29 AM
See ehn See - by OldPikkon - 05-25-2007, 04:57 AM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-25-2007, 12:29 PM
See ehn See - by Orion - 05-25-2007, 01:07 PM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-25-2007, 01:14 PM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-25-2007, 06:24 PM
See ehn See - by Vegeta - 05-25-2007, 08:35 PM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 08:46 PM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 08:53 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-25-2007, 11:02 PM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-25-2007, 11:07 PM
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See ehn See - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 02:39 AM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 05-26-2007, 02:43 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 02:48 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-26-2007, 02:59 AM
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See ehn See - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 03:02 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-26-2007, 03:12 AM
See ehn See - by OldSpice - 05-26-2007, 08:33 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-26-2007, 08:39 AM
See ehn See - by Old Zangya - 05-26-2007, 12:06 PM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 05-26-2007, 12:41 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-26-2007, 01:10 PM
See ehn See - by Deo - 05-26-2007, 01:14 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-26-2007, 01:22 PM
See ehn See - by Orion - 05-26-2007, 02:24 PM
See ehn See - by Nappa - 05-26-2007, 02:28 PM
See ehn See - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 02:33 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 03:52 PM
See ehn See - by Deo - 05-26-2007, 04:09 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 04:13 PM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-26-2007, 05:49 PM
See ehn See - by OldSpice - 05-26-2007, 07:21 PM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-26-2007, 11:05 PM
See ehn See - by Minoshia - 05-27-2007, 01:04 AM
See ehn See - by Paragus - 05-27-2007, 01:07 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-27-2007, 01:30 AM
See ehn See - by Minoshia - 05-27-2007, 01:37 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-27-2007, 04:16 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 05-27-2007, 07:01 PM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 05-27-2007, 10:22 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-27-2007, 10:26 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-28-2007, 04:39 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-28-2007, 10:23 PM
See ehn See - by Yamu - 05-28-2007, 10:25 PM
See ehn See - by Super Buu - 05-28-2007, 10:33 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-28-2007, 10:34 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-28-2007, 10:40 PM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 05-28-2007, 10:45 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-28-2007, 10:56 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-28-2007, 11:02 PM
See ehn See - by Bujin - 05-28-2007, 11:03 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-29-2007, 12:48 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 05-29-2007, 12:50 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-30-2007, 12:58 AM
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See ehn See - by Retane - 05-30-2007, 03:06 AM
See ehn See - by Vegeta - 05-30-2007, 03:10 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 05-30-2007, 03:22 AM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 05-30-2007, 03:41 AM
See ehn See - by Saz - 05-31-2007, 12:28 AM
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See ehn See - by Celipa - 06-01-2007, 12:58 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-01-2007, 01:05 AM
See ehn See - by Celipa - 06-01-2007, 01:11 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 06-01-2007, 01:22 AM
See ehn See - by Celipa - 06-01-2007, 01:27 AM
See ehn See - by Deo - 06-01-2007, 01:28 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-01-2007, 02:24 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 06-01-2007, 02:26 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-01-2007, 02:40 AM
See ehn See - by Deo - 06-01-2007, 02:41 AM
See ehn See - by Aero - 06-01-2007, 06:50 PM
See ehn See - by Aero - 06-01-2007, 10:01 PM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-01-2007, 11:20 PM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 06-02-2007, 12:45 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 06-02-2007, 01:56 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-02-2007, 03:07 AM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 06-04-2007, 03:22 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-04-2007, 03:34 AM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 06-04-2007, 03:37 AM
See ehn See - by Burter - 06-04-2007, 03:40 AM
See ehn See - by Retane - 06-04-2007, 03:41 AM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 06-04-2007, 12:13 PM
See ehn See - by Raditzu - 06-07-2007, 08:20 PM
See ehn See - by Deo - 06-07-2007, 11:27 PM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 06-07-2007, 11:43 PM
See ehn See - by Jinpo - 06-09-2007, 03:46 AM
See ehn See - by Android 17 - 06-10-2007, 01:58 AM
See ehn See - by Bra - 06-10-2007, 02:35 AM

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